I write because I don’t know what else to do with myself

November 02, 2013 :: 3:49 PM

A collection of feedback on the following… Read at your own risk. None of it has been beta’d nor brit-picked. And, of course, I don’t own the Cabin Pressure or Sherlock characters, just my own twisted ideas of how they interact.

This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure: Martin Crieff / Douglas Richardson aka “Marlas”) Pub. November 2013

This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure: Martin Crieff / Douglas Richardson aka “Marlas”) Pub. November 2013

This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure: Martin Crieff / Douglas Richardson aka “Marlas”) Pub. October 2013

It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC: Sherlock Holmes / John Watson aka “Johnlock”) Pub. June 2013

No link for “Scott and Kate.” You’re welcome. (Despite the praise, I still feel it’s terribly written.)

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AO3 (12/02/2013 - “This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”)
They made it! Yes yes yes!! Oh these two.
I absolutely adored all the cuddles and nuzzles and cosy moments and head kisses in this - Douglas kissing Martin’s curls and Martin resting comfortably in Douglas’s broad chest is one of things I love most in the whole wide world.

Thank you so much for bringing the boys together and for letting Martin stay!!

Aawww, all the Marlas feels

<3

AO3 (11/29/2013 - “This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”)
I think you do M/M fine, if your marlas is anything to go by,

AO3 (11/29/2013 - “This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”)
LOVE IT! HOORAY! question, after this fic is finished will there be more?

AO3 (11/27/2013 - “This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”)
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY FINALLLY THE DAMN IDIOTS GET IT RIGHT. GOD BLESS HERCULES THE BERKULES

AO3 (11/19/2013 - “This Week: ZURICH! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”)
Really enjoying this series of stories

AO3 (11/17/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
HUZZAH MORE CUDDLES! Will there be another sequel?

AO3 (11/13/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Please tell me this isn’t how it ends! :( I can’t bear it.
Why can’t they just get it together? This is just not fair.

AO3 (11/12/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
*stifled whimpers* agh *shattering noise* b-but *sobbing* THERE WAS SPOONING AND YOU TOOK IT AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *rolling on the ground in agony* *clutches knees to chest* FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIXXXX THEMMMMMMMM MARTIN YOU IDIOT AND DOUGLAS FUCKING SAY YOU DONT WANT A ONE NIGHT STAND GOD DAMMIT GET YOUR HEADS OUT OF YOUR ARSES
... i liked it

AO3 (11/07/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Yes! It was a wonderful moment indeed and the tattoo must look beautiful!

AO3 (11/06/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Aawww. Oh I love the tattoo and the tender moment they shared there. And the hand moment over breakfast warmed my heart too smile
So lovely to see them getting closer!!

AO3 (11/04/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
sorry I didn’t comment on the new one, I read and loved it

AO3 (11/02/2013 - “This Week: PARIS! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Lovely start! These two warmed my heart once more and wow, well done with the King titles cabin addresses!!!

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AO3 (12/06/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
The sleeping scene is soooo sweet.

AO3 (11/01/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Aaww, I’m so happy to see they shared a tender moment! They really take their time dancing around each other, they should just talk!! Aaahm those two.
But I understand - especially Douglas might need some time, and both are a bit afraid.
Looking forward to the 2nd part!

AO3 (10/31/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
I’m loving this story so much, and will write a more detailed appreciation later, when I don’t have to peck out letters on my iPad at 5 in the morning.

AO3 (10/31/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
HUZZAH A SEQUEL!

AO3 (10/28/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Oh I loved the tender and almost fragile atmosphere of this chapter! So glad they’ve talked a bit and shared some quality time. And the hand holding! D’aawwwwww! Looking forward to more!

AO3 (10/28/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
brilliant, as always

AO3 (10/27/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
This is really lovely. There’s not enough Douglas/Martin in the world; glad to see you adding some that is well-written and sweet and very interesting. Can’t wait to read more!!

AO3 (10/26/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
This is the best Fanfiction I’ve read in a long time smile Keep up the awesome work x Can’t wait for the next chapter!

AO3 (10/18/2013 - “This Week: HARTFORD! (Cabin Pressure / Marlas)”):
Martin’s crush on Douglas is so sweet and I’m curious to read more!

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Fanfiction.net (07/17/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
Okay this was an adorable story! I really really enjoyed it. Thanks so much for writing D

Fanfiction.net (06/29/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
THIS IS THE GREATEST THING I’VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. OH MY GOODNESS. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. AH. IT’S SO PERFECT.

Fanfiction.net (06/28/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
I adore this story. It is so perfectly their relationship that it just…it is. I don’t even know what to say. Brilliantly done. Thank you!

Fanfiction.net (06/23/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
What a lovely story! Really nicely written.

Fanfiction.net (06/05/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Ty.

Fanfiction.net (06/05/13 - “It Was Always There (Sherlock BBC / Johnlock)”):
Wow! Thats such a lovely story! Thx!

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R2D2 (06/03/13 - blog):
Give yourself a little credit. You are intelligent and have an awesome command of the English language. That my friend is a writer’s most powerful asset.

Just keep doing your thing Tam. You are an awesome person, and maybe it takes somebody with my perspective to realize that, but it shouldn’t.

R2D2 (05/18/13 - blog):
But very good writing, I’ll be honest I didn’t expect it to be that good.

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Rollz (09/22/11 - “Scott and Kate (based on Soulmate Boy’s first suicide attempt)”):
I just read “Scott and Kate.”  It was wonderful!  You use such great language and it flows so well.  The dialogue was so good I started to tear up a little at parts but don’t tell anybody that! Thanks so much for sharing with me, it really made my day!

You shouldn’t be shy about your writing, you have a strong voice and you should be proud of that.


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